You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, give details of the ad that you want to publish mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page say how you would like to pay for the advertisement
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing
this
letter because I have a
Change the article
an
appartment
that I want to rent out and looking to advertise it in your Correct your spelling
apartment
newspaper
. Here are some details of the appartment
, it is located in the Richmond Hill neighbourhood, Correct your spelling
apartment
it
consists of one bedroom with Correct word choice
and it
attached
bathroom. It Correct article usage
an attached
also
have
a small decent kitchen. Change the verb form
has
Overall
, this
would be a perfect home for a small family.
I want this
advert to published
on Add a missing verb
be published
front
page of the Add an article
the front
newspaper
because this
way it can gain attention and possibly get noted
by anyone interested in Verb problem
noticed
this
deal. This
appartment
is available immediately and can be rented out anytime. Correct your spelling
apartment
Hence
, I am looking to rent it out as soon as possible.
Lastly
, please tell me the suitable method to pay you for this
advertisment
. I am open to Correct your spelling
advertisement
make
a wire transfer, bank Change the verb form
making
cheques
, cash payment or Fix the agreement mistake
cheque
anyother
method you will prefer.
Correct your spelling
any other
Consdering
the popularity of your Correct your spelling
Considering
newspaper
, I select your newspaper
for the advertisment
with a hope that it will reach mass number of community. I would Correct your spelling
advertisement
appereciate
a timely response from your side. Correct your spelling
appreciate
Also
, if you required
any Change the form of the verb
require
further
informantion
please feel free to contact me.
Yours Correct your spelling
information
faithfull
,
John carrh.Correct your spelling
faithfully
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spelling
Make sure to check for minor spelling errors, such as 'appartment' which should be 'apartment'. While these are small issues, ensuring accuracy can enhance the overall quality of your writing.
content
Consider specifying why your apartment is a 'perfect home for a small family'. Adding brief details like a quiet neighborhood or proximity to schools can strengthen your advertisement.
content
When mentioning payment methods, clarifying your preference, if any, could add clarity to your request and facilitate a smoother transaction process.
structure
The letter is logically structured, making your points clear and easy to follow.
tone
Your use of a formal greeting and closing is appropriate for the context of writing to a newspaper editor.
coherence
Each paragraph contains a single idea, which helps in maintaining a coherent and cohesive flow throughout the letter.
task achievement
You effectively communicated all the necessary details about the apartment and your advertising needs.
tone
The tone you've used is suitable for the situation, striking a balance between being polite and direct.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
