You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, give details of the ad that you want to publish mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page say how you would like to pay for the advertisement

#rent #apartment #editor #newspaper #ad #front #page #advertisement

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing

this

letter because I have

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appartment

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apartment

that I want to rent out and looking to advertise it in your

newspaper

. Here are some details of the

appartment

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apartment

, it is located in the Richmond Hill neighbourhood,

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and it

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consists of one bedroom with

attached

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an attached

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bathroom. It

also

have

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a small decent kitchen.

Overall

this

would be a perfect home for a small family. I want

this

advert to

published

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be published

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front

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page of the

newspaper

because

this

way it can gain attention and possibly get

noted

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by anyone interested in

this

deal.

This

appartment

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apartment

is available immediately and can be rented out anytime.

Hence

, I am looking to rent it out as soon as possible.

Lastly

, please tell me the suitable method to pay you for

this

advertisment

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. I am open to

make

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making

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a wire transfer, bank

cheques

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, cash payment or

anyother

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any other

method you will prefer.

Consdering

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Considering

the popularity of your

newspaper

, I select your

newspaper

for the

advertisment

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with a hope that it will reach mass number of community. I would

appereciate

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appreciate

a timely response from your side.

Also

, if you

required

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any

further

informantion

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information

please feel free to contact me. Yours

faithfull

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faithfully

, John carrh.

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spelling

Make sure to check for minor spelling errors, such as 'appartment' which should be 'apartment'. While these are small issues, ensuring accuracy can enhance the overall quality of your writing.

content

Consider specifying why your apartment is a 'perfect home for a small family'. Adding brief details like a quiet neighborhood or proximity to schools can strengthen your advertisement.

content

When mentioning payment methods, clarifying your preference, if any, could add clarity to your request and facilitate a smoother transaction process.

structure

The letter is logically structured, making your points clear and easy to follow.

tone

Your use of a formal greeting and closing is appropriate for the context of writing to a newspaper editor.

coherence

Each paragraph contains a single idea, which helps in maintaining a coherent and cohesive flow throughout the letter.

task achievement

You effectively communicated all the necessary details about the apartment and your advertising needs.

tone

The tone you've used is suitable for the situation, striking a balance between being polite and direct.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

200 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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