Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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It is argued that electronic gadget makes life easy and comfortable
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support them, whereas, others think it just increases
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public lifestyle.
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, modern
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stress by helping folks to improve their living standards. It gives them
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to utilize their those time in necessary work which they invest in unwanted work like dishwashing and laundry.
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,
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can use their time to learn
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skill
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which can help in their career.
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, they can learn
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language, ads we know in multinational companies, want on
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employees which can handle many works at
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time.
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enhances so many job opportunities in their upcoming future.
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, the main reason is that
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can enjoy their life by using modern
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. Now , they can communicate with their
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ones who, live far from them which is possible only through
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. Apart from that,
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the computer
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gives so many job opportunities like crowed do work from home and
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also
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run their business through
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the internet
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and contact
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different associates who live in different countries. Like, in
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a pandemic
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situation, only online business runs successfully like online shopping, Amazon is the biggest example for that
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can get
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every thing
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at their home and the company earns billions of dollars throughout the Covid situation. In conclusion,
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offend
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modern
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for some reason, it is not deniable it helps
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people
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in different situations like online finding jobs and so on.
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