Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is argued that electronic gadget makes life easy and comfortable
such
as computers and dishwashers, many
people
support them, whereas, others think it just increases
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on
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public lifestyle.
Firstly
, modern
technology
reduce
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stress by helping folks to improve their living standards. It gives them
freedom
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to utilize their those time in necessary work which they invest in unwanted work like dishwashing and laundry.
In addition
,
people
can use their time to learn
new
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skill
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which can help in their career.
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, they can learn
new
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language, ads we know in multinational companies, want on
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employees which can handle many works at
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time.
Moreover
, it
also
enhances so many job opportunities in their upcoming future.
However
, the main reason is that
people
can enjoy their life by using modern
technology
. Now , they can communicate with their
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ones who, live far from them which is possible only through
technology
. Apart from that,
computer
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the computer
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gives so many job opportunities like crowed do work from home and
people
also
run their business through
internet
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the internet
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and contact
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different associates who live in different countries. Like, in
pandemic
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a pandemic
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situation, only online business runs successfully like online shopping, Amazon is the biggest example for that
people
can get
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everything
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every thing
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at their home and the company earns billions of dollars throughout the Covid situation. In conclusion,
although
people
offend
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modern
technology
for some reason, it is not deniable it helps
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people
in different situations like online finding jobs and so on.
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