Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

It is somehow true that in
this
modern world, our household waste
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sufficiently.There are many people all around the world who believe governments should make recycling compulsory,
although
I totally agree with the idea of
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trashes,
but
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I do not think
this
is beneficial to make it as
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legislation.In my opinion, politics can develop
this
habit by using punishments, and the most effective
way
is education.
First
of all,in my point of view,
recycling
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law is not the only
way
to decrease waste.
In addition
,we can tackle the waste problem by making punishments and legal obligations for households owners.
For instance
,in Sweden authorities make people,who fail to adhere to their rules,
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pay
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amount of
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or put them in jail for like a week.Generally, these measures encourage people to obey recycling rules.Obviously,if every individual
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principles,we will see
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waste_free environment in the near future.
Secondly
,in my perspective, the government of each country should use education as a
way
to decline domestic wastes.To cue evidence, schools must teach children and youngsters to how
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damages into reusable
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materials
,
moreover
, how to separate trashes in
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accurate
way
like how Korean crowds learn to do these things.
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that, regardless of
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they can inform adults too.To sum up, education might be more lucrative rather than
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. To conclude, countries need some requirements about recycling issues,but as far as I'm concerned,it is not the only
way
.So,as far as I know, obligations and educational
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make folks responsible
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their wastes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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