At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, a vast
number
of countries have been facing overpopulation. There is no doubt all groups of ages can play a vital role in building a county. Some Use synonyms
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essay will explore both opinions and express negative and positive sides.
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of all, the youth are better workforces than the old Linking Words
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regard, they are willing to undertake great responsibilities due to the fact that they have enough motivation to be successful in their career. They can Linking Words
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deal with working hard and be an upstanding member of the company working at. Linking Words
Secondly
and more importantly, youngsters are more updated as opposed to older adults. Linking Words
As a result
of advancement in science, Linking Words
for instance
, widespread using the Internet can be seen in many countries and, in return, Linking Words
people
can use it in the way they want to increase their Use synonyms
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for instance
, from an economical point of view, young Linking Words
ones
can improve their Use synonyms
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so as to boost the efficiency of the products for exporting and Use synonyms
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, the countries economics will be developed.
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on the other hand
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people
have been more experienced than young Use synonyms
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, and indeed they would be good assets for every country. Use synonyms
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, from my viewpoint, they are more likely to find it difficult to use new technologies in order to gain new Linking Words
knowledge
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knowledge
would be outdated and inefficient if they were unable to be updated.
In conclusion, both age groups are essential for having a productive nation. Use synonyms
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, I believe that a large Linking Words
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of elderly Use synonyms
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might have some drawbacks, the merits are far more.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...