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Some students think that internet-based lectures is better type of lectures. The other tend to believe that University-based lectures is still needed. Explain both sides and give your opinion.

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Some
people
 believe that online learning is better than studying at university while others oppose
this
 view and state that it is still important. In my opinion, even though the online course is more advantageous, studying lessons in universities is still important due to the chance of discussion in the lecture room. On the one hand, learning on the internet is more convenient and can reduce some expenditures that spend on transportation. Since
students
 can learn at any time and anywhere, it would be obviously better than travelling to universities for lectures and when
students
 do not have to go to universities, it means that they
also
 do not have to pay for public transport if they study at their houses.
This
 is one of the main reasons why some
people
 chose online courses over traditional learning.
On the other hand
, some
students
 still believe that face to face learning is still crucial because of the chances of interaction between
students
 and professors and the chances of discussion among
students
. if
students
 have a question to ask, not only can they ask immediately, but they will
also
 receive the answer of the question instantly
in contrast
 to some online courses.
Moreover
, when there are many
people
 in the lecture room, they can brainstorm an idea and discuss it with other
people
 easily.
for example
, when you have a curious topic that makes you want to know other
people
's opinions, you can raise your hand and ask about
this
 topic in the classroom. In conclusion, learning on the internet have some benefits for some
people
 in the case of convenience and money,
however
, I still think that traditional learning is
also
 vital since the
students
 can have a discussion with others and their professors.
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