Many cities have become less pleasant places to live in recent years. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

More and more metropolitans around the world are becoming unpleasant locations to live in the
last
few years. I strongly believe that
although
traffic
congestion and shortage of housing are serious problems,that there are viable solutions. One major problem is
traffic
congestion.
This
is a problem because getting stuck in
traffic
for long hours makes people waste their productivity and relaxation time. The main cause of
this
in most
cities
is
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the continuous increases in the
quantity
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of private cars while the number of
traffic
routes
remain
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the same. One possible solution would be for the state governments to construct more roadways linking many nearby satellite
cities
districts and encourage local people to commute by public transport
instead
of personal cars.
For example
, in 2012,
Malaysian
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government reduced the metro fare and constructed more highways covering all areas, including business and residential areas, in and around Kuala Lumpur, which resulted in generating more working and leisure time for people. Another major problem is a shortage of housing. One negative effect is that property accommodation prices and rents are extremely expensive while finding a satisfactory residence is more difficult. The main cause of
this
is the
relativeover
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relative over
-development in the of capital
cities
only, which leads to
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density of population in a single area. A solution, which would certainly be effective, is for the national authority to expand
business
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and economic development and
connectivitys
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connectivity
through rural areas.
For instance
, in the 1950s,
Japanese
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government decided to distribute their commercial space throughout two
cities
, including Osaka and Sendai, which resulted in a 10% decrease
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accommodation
cost
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in Tokyo in the following 3 years. In conclusion, issues with
traffic
and insufficiency in housing are major concerns in city
centers
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worldwide, I think these solutions would be effective. I recommend that governments always prepare their plans beforehand in order to solve the problems happening and improve the life quality of their citizens together.
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