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You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language – • ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly • propose that you meet your friend to talk about it

#language #first #friend #suggestions
Hi John, How's it going? Hope you are doing well and
still'
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still have
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ve
 a great time at uni. I haven't heard from you for ages! What have you been up to? Guess- what I got hired by a multinational company as a computer technician. I want to learn
a
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spanish
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Spanish
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 because at my workplace most of
the
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collegues
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colleagues
colleges
 use to speak
this
 language. I
also
 want to talk with them
in
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 it.
Therefore
, I'
ve
 decided to work on it. I know a little bit about it but not
prefectly
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perfectly
. I remember once you learnt
this
 language and
you'
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you have
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ve
a knowledge
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 about it. I would appreciate
if
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 you give me some suggestions. I'
ve
 watched many
vedios
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videos
 on youtube and other sites but I didn't see any good results. Would you think I need to join a course? As
,
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 you speak it very well and it's so long to see you. We can meet
on
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 dinner where we can discuss
on
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it and have some quality time with each other. I
cann't
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can't
 wait to meet you after years. I'm so excited. Let me know asap what's best for you. I'd love to be with you. Lots of love, Priya
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