You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language – • ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly • propose that you meet your friend to talk about it

Hi John, How's it going? Hope you are doing well and

still'

Change the wording

still have

still have got

still've got

show examples

a great time at uni. I haven't heard from you for ages! What have you been up to? Guess- what I got hired by a multinational company as a computer technician. I want to learn

Remove the article

apply

show examples

spanish

Change the capitalization

Spanish

show examples

because at my workplace most of

the

Change the word

show examples

collegues

Correct your spelling

colleagues

colleges

use to speak

this

language. I

also

want to talk with them

Change preposition

about

show examples

it.

Therefore

, I'

decided to work on it. I know a little bit about it but not

prefectly

Correct your spelling

perfectly

. I remember once you learnt

this

language and

you'

Change the wording

you have

you have got

you've got

show examples

a knowledge

Remove the article

knowledge

a piece of knowledge

show examples

about it. I would appreciate

Correct pronoun usage

it if

show examples

you give me some suggestions. I'

watched many

vedios

Correct your spelling

videos

on youtube and other sites but I didn't see any good results. Would you think I need to join a course? As

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

you speak it very well and it's so long to see you. We can meet

Change preposition

show examples

dinner where we can discuss

Change preposition

apply

show examples

it and have some quality time with each other. I

cann't

Correct your spelling

can't

wait to meet you after years. I'm so excited. Let me know asap what's best for you. I'd love to be with you. Lots of love, Priya

Submitted by narinderpalk65 on Sun Dec 19 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

196 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
The population of most cities is growing as people move cities to find work and new opportunities. What problems does overpopulation in cities cause ? How can these problems be solved?
Nowadays, major cities are filled with a large amount of population due to having many job placements and living in a better place. This population in the cities faces many issues. This essay will examine the cause of the issue and discuss about the possible solution as well.
4.5
band
The effect of people to the environment is so much nowadays,what can the government and individuals do to restore or prevent further damage to the environment.
An environment is an external bodies surrounding a man which defines and classify the kind of organism that lives in it. An environment is incomplete without the inhabitant likewise human cannot do without their environment. Humans and their environment interact on daily basis. Humans cannot survive without interacting with their environment.
4.5
band
Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extend do you agree and disagree?
It is obvious that technology has taken a predominant role in society and its dominance over the entertainment industry is undeniable. Some intellectuals opine that the exorbitant exploitations of TVs and video games have the potential to sabotage the adolescent's psychological capabilities. From my perspective, I agree with the aforementioned opinion and my supporting arguments will be given further.
4
band
You have recently opened up a shop in your area and as an advertisement campaign. You would like to send a letter to all potential customers. Introduce your shop Introduce your services And offer a special discount for the new customers. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in 150 words on your answer sheet.
I've always been a little leery of proclaiming anything "the best".I never declared anyone my best friend as a kid because I was afraid my other friends might assume I thought less of them.So,it was a little difficult for me to come up with just one "best" advertisement of all time-which is why there are 18 in this post instead.Because of the impact they had on the growth of the brand, amd because they manage to hit on some universal truth that allows us to remember these campaigns years after they first began.In fact, some of us might not have even been alive when these campaigns first aired.But to know what makes an advertisement great, you first need to know how an advertisement is defined.
7
band
Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
In the last recent years, the development of big countries has influenced the increase of immigration. The fact is that, this massive change has a profound implications on society, which I am going to shed some light on.

The population of most cities is growing as people move cities to find work and new opportunities. What problems does overpopulation in cities cause ? How can these problems be solved?

The effect of people to the environment is so much nowadays,what can the government and individuals do to restore or prevent further damage to the environment.

Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extend do you agree and disagree?

Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?