The only reason people work hard is to earn more money. There are no other reasons to do it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in the materialistic society where we live people tend to

work

as hard as they can only to outstanding a superficial life

buying

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goods. Some people believe that their main and only reason to

work

is to earn money. As far as I am concerned, individuals have other motivations to gain in their professional

life

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lives

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rather than money.

This

essay will discuss the reasons why I extremely believe people have other reasons to go for

work

besides

financially

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gain.

Firstly

, workers worldwide will have higher

up

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aspirations rather than remuneration,

such

as esteem and self-actualization. Once someone goes to university, the desire of achievement in

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a good job,

being

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promoted and

having

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their

hard-

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hard work

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work

rewarded is

also

part of any person’s aspiration.

Maslow

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Hierarchy of Needs illustrates that employment represented by financial security comes as “Safety needs”,

while

psychological and self-fulfilment needs will be

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top

in

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the pyramid representing all the prestige, feeling of accomplishment and achieving full potential.

Therefore

, human beings have a vast range of necessities rather than the safety-needs.

In addition

, despite the psychological approach, another factor can be

also

spiritual. Spiritual needs are defined as needs and expectations which humans have to find meaning, purpose, and value in their

life

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lives

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,

such

needs can be

also

applied in their workplace. One remarkable example is Mother Theresa, who remains known in history as someone who is selfless,

as a result

of committing her time and effort towards helping the less fortunate.

Thus

,

this

makes it impossible to justify the fact that people’s only reason for hard

work

is no other than financial.

To conclude

, from the arguments presented above, it is inconceivable to believe that financial remuneration is

that

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driven

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them to

work

.

Although

monetary aspiration is a vital factor worker would consider their career aspirations,

spiritual

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and spiritual

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beliefs and will

also

be a reason for them to pursue a job.