Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow any exercise routine. Why do you think it is happening? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?
Older
people
are recommended by doctors to have a regular exercise
plan, but most of them do not have any routine. There are a number of causative factors contributing to this
new phenomenon.Nonetheless
,certain measures can be taken to encourage this
generation.
there are two main reasons why older people
do not consider exercise
to be their daily routine. To begin
with, many of these elderly may forget to exercise
regularly. To put it differently, they are bound to fail to remember their daily affairs which is
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apply
stem
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stems
such
as Alzheimer
or just being lazy. A lucid example of Change noun form
Alzheimer's
this
is people
who have operated on their knees or spinal cord and they need to work out at least twice a day in order to heal sooner but unfortunately, they tend to forget to work out after their surgery. Secondly
, older people
are mostly alone and isolated and this
may lead them to not being in the mood of walking or doing regular exercise
.
In my view, these people
can be encouraged by some measures in their life
. As for encouragement, Fix the agreement mistake
lives
one’s
can be reminded by their children or even the media or advertising industry daily. Simply put, Change noun form
one
media
can produce specific Correct article usage
the media
sport
programs just for Fix the agreement mistake
sports
this
section of society. A good illustration of this
is special workout channels on TV to obviate the needs of the elderly. Younger people
, furthermore
, can hold exercise
plans and activities for seniors to inspire them to gather around and exercise
in a group. Take group activities in parks as a salient example; Instructors can hold classes in fresh air for the older generation which does not only inspire them but also
ameliorate their health level.
to sum up
, seniors
encouragement seems to have a burden on Change noun form
seniors'
senior's
younger
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the younger
generations
shoulders. In spite of all contributing factors, proper plans can reduce the severity of Change noun form
generations'
generation's
this
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