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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write papers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

#communications #it’s #papers
How much it was annoying to
wait
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 letters for months until they arrived
into
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 their destinations? It is
the
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time to end
this
 era. Technology helped humanity to
built
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 a communication bridge between all countries where services are instant, efficient and time-reducing.
Therefore
, I strongly believe that new communications are more
signifcant
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significant
 than
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a piece
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piece
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 of paper
,
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 because they are productive and eco friendly.
First
 of all, recent methods to communicate proved their ability to manage time and increase the exchanges between several communities. In fact, we can write a message for our foreign relatives , our employers and
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our favorite
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favorite
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 shop in
few
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a few
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 seconds, and it delivers quickly without any restrictions. Time and money are the most important elements in
business
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a business
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 where international companies aim to use emails, online conferences and social
advertisments
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advertisements
 as very powerful weapons in the market in order to develop their profits.
For instance
, Zoom and Outlook are considered to be in the top internet
pltaforms
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platforms
platform
 where persons can interact and
acess
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access
 easily with their interests.
Secondly
, protecting the environment is a global concern for governments and organizations all around the world. We all know that writing on
a
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paper will cost our nature many of its
ressources
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resources
 and raw materials
such
 as wood,
leafs
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leaves
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, plastic and even animals. A simple electronic mail will be sent using only a small current of electricity
that is
 already supplying the machine like a mobile phone or a computer. Another issue will be in the ink in pens which it fabricating process usually is
distructive
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destructive
 for the other living species. To conclude, it is vital in
our
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recent times to use
the
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modern communication tools in order to
facilate
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facilitate
 our life. I hope we will suspect more development and features in
this
 domain,
beacuse
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because
 it was very helpful in the
last
 decades.
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