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Some people believe that children should be taught how to manage money at school. Do you agree or disagree?

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People nowadays believe that children should get some lessons on money management concept. Some agree with
this
 statement and others like me strongly disagree with it.
This
 essay will give reasons for the above statement. To start with, children should focus on their academic subjects like maths and science which is more important than learning
concepts
 like money management. It will cause a burden on
students
 and can disturb their focus on their studies which can put their carrier in danger.
This
 is a very crucial period of their life and learning these types of
concepts
 will be a waste. So
Students
 should avoid secondary skills and focus on primary subjects. On other hand, In school
time
 child’s brains are not mature enough. So teaching them these
concepts
 will be waste of
time
 because
students
 will not be going to learn anything from them.
For example
, in 2010, a survey was conducted by
students
 from Oxford University, which states that in schooling
time
, student's brain is in the developing stage and not able to grasp
concepts
 like in which life experience is required.
Students
 should learn these
concepts
 once they are mature and experienced to grasp
such
 lessons. Personally speaking, a school should not teach
this
 type of concept early it will affect
students
 primary education and they will get disturbed. After a particular age, he/she learn little automatically. To sum up, money skill is a key, but it should not be taught in school as
students
 will not be able to grasp and it would be waste of
time
.
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