It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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need to have their own judgement between right and wrong. There is a discussion that

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is needed to make them learn the difference. According to the statement above, the essay certainly states that

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is necessary but, I believe, we

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need a reinforcement procedure to encourage

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to learn.

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with,

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is effective when guardians need to stop students from impolite behaviours. When adolescents act in a mad manner, unfortunately, it is not every time that parents or teachers can stop

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from the action. In

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circumstance, it is a good situation to teach a

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that their action is inappropriate with

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.

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will learn that making improper habits will make them uncomfortable. To illustrate, if youngsters use rude words with their parents,

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they will be abandoned for a certain time.

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, they don't recreate the bad behaviour which is, in

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case, using bad words.

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, the rewarding method is a good way which

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students to do a good thing. If the teaching method includes only

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, adolescents might perceive aggressive behaviours.

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, reinforcement will make them soft and want to do good behaviours.

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, when a

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responds to their daily tasks without help needed, teachers should give them a reward.

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will make the

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wants to repeat the habit in order to get a reward again. To summarise, the essay mostly agrees to use

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on teaching a

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about their judgement but other

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as rewarding

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need to be used too.

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but not least,

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methods

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should not be

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that are aggressive to the

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, hitting and shouting. It will make them learn to use aggressive behaviour when they grow up. The method that should be used needs to be soft but conflicts with the

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as self-quarienteen.