You have enrolled in an evening course but you have found that you are too busy to continue and would like to take the course next term instead. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter: Explain the situation and why you cannot continue the course say what you would like to do about your studies ask for advice about what you can do about the situation. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr.Andrew,
I am writing
this
letter in regard to tell you that I would
not be able to continue my evening Management course. The reason behind Wrong verb form
will
this
decision is I have to do extra work shifts everyday
to cover my family's emergency expenses.
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every day
This
was a hard decision to made
. Change the form of the verb
make
However
, I am still planning to continue my other courses and re-take
the Management course next term. May I ask if you have any advice for me regarding Correct your spelling
retake
this
situation? I am hoping that I will still be able to learn Management topic
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topics
on
my leisure time as I love the subject and would like to prepare for my next term. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, can you please let me know if there is any chance this
subject will be open for other hours this
trimester.
I am looking forward to your answer and I hope you are having a good day.
Kind regards,
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task achievement
Work on providing a more detailed explanation for why you need to do extra work shifts. This would strengthen the completeness of your response.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better clarity. Although the letter is well-organized, the second paragraph could be split into two to separate your plans and your request for advice.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is polite and appropriate for a formal correspondence with a teacher.
coherence and cohesion
Your greeting and closing are well-done and add to the overall coherence of your letter.