You have enrolled in an evening course but you have found that you are too busy to continue and would like to take the course next term instead. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter: Explain the situation and why you cannot continue the course say what you would like to do about your studies ask for advice about what you can do about the situation. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mr.Andrew, I am writing

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letter in regard to tell you that I

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not be able to continue my evening Management course. The reason behind

this

decision is I have to do extra work shifts

everyday

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to cover my family's emergency expenses.

This

was a hard decision to

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However

, I am still planning to continue my other courses and

re-take

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the Management course next term. May I ask if you have any advice for me regarding

this

situation? I am hoping that I will still be able to learn Management

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my leisure time as I love the subject and would like to prepare for my next term.

Moreover

, can you please let me know if there is any chance

this

subject will be open for other hours

this

trimester

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I am looking forward to your answer and I hope you are having a good day. Kind regards, Nisa

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task achievement

Work on providing a more detailed explanation for why you need to do extra work shifts. This would strengthen the completeness of your response.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better clarity. Although the letter is well-organized, the second paragraph could be split into two to separate your plans and your request for advice.

task achievement

The tone of your letter is polite and appropriate for a formal correspondence with a teacher.

coherence and cohesion

Your greeting and closing are well-done and add to the overall coherence of your letter.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

153 words

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