News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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As the technology advanced articles in newspapers and stories in television are often presented to us with the help of
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. Some individuals state that
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way of delivering a news story is way more effective than just with words. I both agree and disagree with
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point of view. Even though the true scale of the situation can be seen through
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but some content is
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shown which may not be very pleasing to the eye.
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can say a lot about the situation of the scene and give us the power to imagine how big the scale is.
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, there is a huge difference between just saying “Around 10,000 people attended the concert” and showing the
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the picture of the concert. Even though
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they may not be able to feel the chills just by seeing the crowd through the photograph but they can imagine the energy in everyone
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present at the concert in real life.
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may encourage the
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to find out new passions in their life.
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, showing the grand scheme of things is good but sometimes content
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not pleasing to the eye is
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shown in newspapers and television.
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, showing the images of terrorist attack disturb the mental health of the
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especially children.
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can have a huge impact on their behaviour in the future. Without proper
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some even might get influenced by
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kinds of pictures in their head and may choose the wrong path. To sum things up even though
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are more efficient in conveying the message to the
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if not displayed properly
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may have a bad effect on some.
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can be avoided by having a board to discuss things up before posting anything.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • empathize
  • instantaneous comprehension
  • irrefutable evidence
  • transcend language barriers
  • overreliance
  • oversimplification
  • misinformation
  • desensitizing
  • nuance
  • in-depth analysis
  • symbiotic relationship
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