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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers

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The topic of the importance of
homework
 has become increasingly popular nowadays.Numbers of people assume that it plays an important role in the education of
children
.
However
 , others do not agree with
this
 conjecture .In my opinion,the concept of
homework
 was outdated.
Firstly
,let us consider the points of people who believe that
homework
 is still actual.Probably, they think so because of fact that they studied in the old system of education and they forgotten that the time was changed and what worked in the past do not work now.It is quite difficult for adults to adopt new ideas.
Also
, the idea of studying without
homework
 did not appear because teachers does not want to check the works of students and puppies.New inventions in the field of psychology suggest that training without
homework
 can make the learning process more successful.For
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instant, Finland, where school
children
 are not given
homework
, regularly top international educational league tables and outperform nations where setting
homework
 is the norm.
Nevertheless
, a number of people do not agree with these statements. They suggest that it is impossible to learn material which their
children
 received in school without practice.We can not deny the fact that
homework
 has a lot of benefits .
Firstly
,
children
 can learn how to solve the problem alone at their own pace. In doing so, students must apply the knowledge that they have learnt in the classroom.
For example
, by doing mathematics exercises at home, students consolidate their understanding of the concepts taught by their teacher at school. To draw the conclusion,I can say that
homework
 certainly has its benefits ,but time has been already changed and the drawbacks outweigh them in the long term.
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