A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • Explain how to apply for the job

#friend #job #country #company #sort #work

Dear Jaslyn, How are you? I hope

this

email finds you well. We haven't met since our graduation event, have we? Time flew so fast. I've read your mail and I think I might be able to find you a suitable job here. My ex-colleague mentioned a vacancy in her team just

last

week. It is for a System Analyst position in the IT department of a hospital. The job roles include supporting clinicians on the IT issues that they encounter on a daily basis, as well as assisting her in implementing various IT projects for the hospital.

This

position requires one to work closely with the hospital users and hospital management team. She's looking for an IT degree holder who has adequate experience in delivering IT projects as well as system maintenance. Since you have majored in Computer Science and you have the experience that she is looking for, I think you will be a great fit for

this

position. If you're interested in applying for

this

job, please let me know and I'll recommend you to her. If she's interested to get in touch with you, I'll pass her your email address and phone number. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Norah Chen

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