Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Internet
is becoming
important
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part of
day
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to day life. Few
universites
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universities
started to
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the
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online
courses
so that
students
can learn online. My take on
this
,
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apply
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is that online
courses
will be less effective
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attending the
classes
in universities.
Firstly
, due to online
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courses
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course
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there will be less interaction between professors and
students
. Due to which there will be declination in
the
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apply
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asking the questions, solving doubts and learning in the group.
For instance
, it happened
last
semester with us, because of COVID virus spreading in the whole city, our college decided to start the lectures online. When the online
classes
started, the professor
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always tried to explain the lectures within an hour but it extend due to any
reasons
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and so
professor
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the professor
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skips the doubt sessions with the
students
.
This
explains that how
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internet
education is completing the
courses
with
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half learning.
Secondly
, another problem
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arises with online education is the lack of
internet
infastructure
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infrastructure
.
Internet
speed should be consistent and good to do the online
courses
. But most of the
students
still doesn't have
a
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proper
internet
access
becaues
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because
of
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this
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it becomes very hard or
next
to impossible for them to do the online
courses
.
For example
, In the countries like India,
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shows that 30% of student has been unable to attend
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online
classes
due to
lack
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of
internet
access or devices.
Biggest
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problem coming with
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apply
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online
courses
is
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availability
avability
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the avability
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of
internet
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the internet
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. In the conclusion, online
classes
might give
advantage
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to the universities to save
thier
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their
expenses but on
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other
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side from the student
perspective
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it would be a challenging and mostly a disaster for the people
those
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who
dont
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don't
have the
internet
or don't
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understand
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under stand
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understand
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the
courses
properly. While offline
classes
will help
sudents
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students
to ask more questions with that they don't have to face some big issues
such
as lack of
internet
access.
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