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Band 7

You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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 letter to buy a house in
Toronto
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, Canada I am Bhavani, Recently, I have got a job and my daughter got admission to
Toronto
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. So, I am planning to move with my family. My younger daughter and my husband
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 come with us. I need your help to buy a house in
Toronto
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Firstly
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, I am looking for a two-bedroom flat,
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, a fully furnished apartment will be an option because I don’t think, I can spend much time buying the furniture and necessary things.
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, it will be good if it has a storeroom and a balcony.
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 to that, it should have one parking space, As I was thinking to export my car from Indian to Canada.
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, my daughter got admission to the University of
Toronto
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. It will be great if you can arrange an apartment near to the university. It will be helpful if you can help me to find
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 kind of an apartment Yours faithfully
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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