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Many parents today organize extra classes for their children after school and at the weekend. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Children
 nowadays are confronted with an increasing number of academic difficulties.
As a result
, some
parents
 believe that scheduling extra classes beyond school hours will help their
children
 cope better with the modern world, while others say that the school provides adequate
education
 to their youngsters. The latter viewpoint is one with which I completely agree.
To begin
 with, the schools have provided adequate
education
 to their kids. Because students spend more time in schools than in private tuition, school teachers spend more time with their students because they know their students' capacities and can teach them properly.
Furthermore
, because any country's
education
 system is knowledge-based rather than skill-based, teachers only teach those things that carry the most marks.
Moreover
, because any country's
education
 system is knowledge-based rather than skill-based, teachers only teach those things that carry the most marks.
For instance
, all pupils must have been fatigued after 8 hours of schooling and needed to unwind, yet
parents
 send their
children
 to private tuitions because they want their
children
 to achieve in every profession.
For instance
,
parents
 waste not only their money
,
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 but
also
 their
children
's time and health if they allow their
children
 to learn while they are tired. Over-studying, according to some researchers, does not make
children
 smarter or more brilliant. In conclusion, governments and
parents
 should work together to build educational systems that are more practical, creative, and stress-free for their
children
, and extracurricular activities should be phased out in
favor
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 of soft skills training.
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