The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local are is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. in your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suggest what should be done about the problem

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complaint

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about the garbage collection machine which was installed

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month in our locality. It seems the machine got some anomaly, it is not able to process the recyclable product like plastic bottles, cups and soda cans from our daily garbage. I am a resident of Rustomjee Housing society for the past 5 years house number no 903. I was equally sceptical and excited about the decision of the council members to install an automated dustbin, which separates recyclable plastic items from the regular waste.

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the new bins are not able to process any rubbish. All the waste for the past weeks is still been clogged over the top. Eventually,

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accumulation has created a huge backlog and now we got no space to dispose

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day to day garbage. I would be obliged if you can assign a concerned person to look into these issues and rectify them. As I understand the company which have designed the system can assist you with

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. I hope you would consider the issue urgent, waiting for your reply. Yours Faithfully Sachin Hegde

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection system
not working properly
bins
designated collection days
overflowing with rubbish
collection trucks
efficiency
reliability
problems
unpleasant odours
attracting pests
flies
rats
unwanted pests
accumulation of rubbish
unsightly
unhygienic environment
uncollected waste
inconvenience
storing garbage
health hazards
immediate attention
local council
prompt action
properly maintained
staffed adequately
waste management system
regular inspections
functioning effectively
establish a complaint mechanism
waste segregation
proper waste disposal
public awareness campaigns
waste management experts
sustainable solutions

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