The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

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In recent years, many people have acknowledged that it is very important to preserve different species of
animals
and plants from dying out because their increasing numbers are at risk of extinction. In
this
essay, I will detail possible measures to solve
this
problem. There is no denying that strong anti-deforestation law enforcement is the most effective tool to protect natural habitats from degradation.
However
, it should be done wisely as humans
also
have needs to be met. A better example of
this
can be provided
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in the northern mountainous provinces of Vietnam, where indiscriminate exploitation of tropical hardwoods for house construction has contributed to the destruction of
rain forests
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and soil erosion in recent years.
However
,
this
strategy might have a very tiny effect
in
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conserving the entire endangered ecosystem.
Apart from
this
, another aspect is that the government and people should protect endangered
animals
. In recent years, a large number of illegal rhino horns have been sold in the market for medical purposes. A better example of
this
can be best provided by the border of Vietnam and Laos, where there are still many cases of illegal trade in rhino horns.
Although
many wildlife organizations have launched many campaigns to protect and preserve wild
animals
, they have not been practical and effective. From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that the government should take responsibility and act more urgently.
Moreover
, they need to come up with stronger and more effective laws to preserve the world’s plants and
animals
in order to minimize the loss of biodiversity.
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