There are more new towns nowadays it is more important to include public parks and sports facilities and shopping centers for individuals to spend their free time to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe the new

cities

should have more

parks

and

sports

facilities

such

as football pitch, basketball court, baseball ground and suchlike. But, others believe that having more shopping

centers

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and shopping malls is more crucial. In the following paragraphs, I intend to outline the arguments of both sides.

First

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in foremost,

parks

and particularly trees are essential for

for

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human being and the main reason is that they produce oxygen which is an important element for

durability

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the durability

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of almost all creatures that lives on earth. So having more

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and

parks

will bring more oxygen and more fresh air.

Also

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it is vital for solving air pollution and new

cities

don’t face

such

problems. Because

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Big

cities

are facing

this

crisis and it is hard to deal with

this

issue.

Furthermore

, Parksville

make

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beautiful

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landscape for major

cities

.

for instance

, Central

park

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in New York

City

is one of the places that even tourists are attracted to it.

In addition

, if you live in

the

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city

which

have

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a lot of

sport

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facilities

, you are likely to have more interest in

sports

. To make it simple, having more support

facilities

in the

city

will encourage people to do

sports

and it is really important for the health of the society.

On the other hand

, shopping

centers

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and malls will have economical advantages. To make it clear, each mall and plaza have a lot of stores and each store need people to work in it.

As a result

, unemployment in that

city

will be not a major problem.

Moreover

, it will help citizens to find what they need,easier.

Sobthey

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So they

Southey

don’t

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have to look for what they want and it will help the traffic of the

city

. Having considered

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arguments in some depth, I have reached the conclusion that including

parks

and

sports

facilities

is more significant for

cities

and I suggested the balance between

parks

and

sport

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complexes and shopping malls shouldn’t be overlooked.