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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Because of
the
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globalization, over the
last
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 two or three decades, people have been staying in another country tremendously than ever before. Living in a
state
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while
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where
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 you should speak the regional
language
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instead
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 of a foreign
lingustic
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linguistic
 because
this
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 can create serious social troubles as well as practical
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.
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, I strongly agree with
this
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 statement for the following reasons.
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 with, speaking in
a
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 overseas
lingustic
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linguistic
 bring more repercussions when a person stays in another
state
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.
This
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 creates loneliness who speaks in another
language
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,
thus
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, might be creating communication
problem
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 between local people and foreigners.
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, in France shop vendors speak French,
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, any other parts of
world
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the world
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 folks might be visited
this
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 nation while they should speak French
otherwise
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 will create communication
problem
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problems
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.
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, if a person
visit
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to
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other nation, he should know about theirs' primary
language
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,
as a result
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, can be lived more freely and can easily socialise
to
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with
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 others.
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, in
germany
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Germany
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 folks face many problems
about
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with
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English
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english
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the english
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language
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 when they are going
to
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outside theirs'
state
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. Many folks face
these situation
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this situation
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 in another territory while staying
a
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in a
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different nation.
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, not only they
suffers
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 socially but
also
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 practically. To conclude, speaking another
language
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 in
other territory
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another territory
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 will be created more repercussions
such
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 as practically as well as socially.
Repercussion
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 is that creating loneliness and communication problems.
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, I strongly agree with
statement
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the statement
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 in the above-mentioned details. I hope
this
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 process is conducive to helping
to
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visitors when living in another
state
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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