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Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

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some people love to stay in cold weather and some like to live in moderate climates. It depends on the individuals what is their preference. God had created perfect weather every season is important.
However
, even if I talk about myself I will like to in moderate conditions.
Firstly
, due to the changes in environments in some territories temperatures are falling rising rapidly
this
 may lead the population to move to the colder countries because they are too frustrated even though they
also
 get attracted by social media snowfall district and lifestyle there make them wonder how good their life would be but
this
 is not true they face a lot of ups and downs. ,Now let's move to the other hand of the topic includes some individuals who stay in colder provinces who prefer to stay in hot regions
for example
 Australia,Africa and Dubai where temperatures are very hot. But never forget the individuals who stay there do not like the hot weather due to skin burns and cannot go out in the afternoons hours because of sunstroke.
secondly
, society who are born in the colder territories cannot stay a long period in the hotter area because their DNA would urge them to go back from where they belong
also
 they're brought up they can experience the lifestyle in hotter areas but trust me they won't
last
 long the same opposite happens with the community who want to stay in colder areas. According to , heated places is easy to live and stay in while compared to colder countries the depression rate is higher there. to summon up, it all depends on the personal choice like how he or she is comfortable which environment suits them according they can move on and start a new phase of their life.
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