Some people believe that newspaper is the most effective way to read news; however others believe that others media is better to get information. Discuss both and give your opnion and give your own opnion.

It is certainly the case that ,in the past, newspapers was one of the most critical ways for
people
to get
information
.
However
, whether reading the
newspaper
is the most effective way to know what's happened or other media is more effective in newsgathering is up to debate. In the following essay, I will analyse both opinions and explain why I believe there has a better way to reach the
news
. It is often argued that
newspaper
plays the most critical role in
information
gathering. By reading the
newspaper
people
can know what is happening around the world, including social, financial and sport aspects.
Moreover
, compared with
internet
articles, articles published are more reliable.
This
is because
news
published in the
newspaper
have been checked by the editors before they are released.
However
,
although
some of the
information
on the
website
is inaccurate,
this
argument is still groundless. Because many
news
publishers
also
have online websites, if
people
read the
news
on
this
kind of
website
they can get the exact same content on the
newspaper
from the websites. Another common opinion is that the
internet
is the most effective way for
people
to access new
information
. The two main reasons are that
information
released on websites are more quickly than on
newspaper
, and that the
internet
can provide various kind of content, including articles, videos, and photographs.
Firstly
, authors can update out breaking
news
and develop
news
24-7 on the
internet
, whereas newspapers only update stories once a day or a week.
For example
, 'Apple Daily' is published once a day, and 'Financial Times' in Taiwan is published once a week.
Secondly
, using the
internet
we can get
information
in different formats. Because of technology innovations, videos and photos are allowed to be uploaded to the
website
. Take the
news
of covid-19
for example
. We can find the videos of interviews with doctors, the broadcast of related topics, the interactive charts on the
website
, while newspapers only can provide text and picture content. In conclusion, it is undoubtablely that
newspaper
used to be the most important means to reach
news
;
however
, according to the reasons above, the
internet
is the more effective approach to reach
news
in modern society
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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