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Some scientist thinks that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Science and technology have been the part and parcel of the human soul since ancient days. The industrial revolution has changed the lifestyle of humans because of new inventions and discoveries which have taken place in our sphere.
However
, the question remains Is there activity beyond earth Earth? Some scientists are curious and want to explore those fields
in contrast
 to the ones who feel it might not be a good idea. In my opinion, curiosity has always been a push to mankind and exploring communication options to the different planets can be bliss to the globe. On one hand,
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scientist thinks that intelligent growth on other planets can be helpful and can lead to various innovations which are beyond our thinking. If the soul exists on another
planet
then
 knowing about their
life
 culture can help us in many ways either it can help us gain more fruitful information in our industrial revolution or help us in our biotechnological growth. Contacting those
life
forms
 will help us know more about the universe ,
for instance
, Moon has been the closest
planet
 where intelligent
life
forms
 might exist after the discovery of water. If somehow effective communication can be established we might have another
planet
 to live on.
On the other hand
, some people think it can be hazardous as experimenting with the universe can be dangerous and can cause all the
life
forms
 in big trouble. It can be harmful to the whole
planet
 as we do not have enough information on the reaction of other planets to existing living organisms. In my opinion, I feel risk and curiosity can do wonders for humankind and effective communication should be established among the other
life
forms
 for great discoveries. In conclusion, humans have been the most intelligent
life
forms
 on
planet
 Earth and interacting with other
life
forms
 in the different universes can be helpful but careful examination of all the test cases needs to be taken into consideration.
However
, better things happen when better risks are taken.
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