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Students today can access information online, so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? no less than 250 words

#students #access #information #libraries
In today's world technology is becoming one of the crucial parts of our lives. In recent years there had been a gradual increase in the number of online readers.
As a result
, there is always a debate among people regarding the necessity of a library because the majority of the information is available online. I strongly feel that libraries should remain in the system and I will be supporting my perspective in the coming paragraphs. The
first
 reason to support my point of view is that
although
 a lot of data is stored on the website,
however
, all the knowledge there is not true and there are no references mentioned for them.
In addition
 to
this
, the knowledge on the internet are not arranged in a proper manner which confuses the majority of the readers and they have to look for different websites for one topic. For ,example in a majority of the
,
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cases there are various statements that are the writer's point of view and not the true info. The
second
 supporting point for my viewpoint is that a lot of topics on the web are either taken from books or the scripts taken from the interviews which sometimes don't make any sense.
For instance
, if someone searches about the earth, google will provide us material from which we have to carefully pick the important message and
then
 filter it out.
On the contrary
, in ,libraries the data is arranged in a proper manner according to subjects, topics and writers.
This
 not only saves time in searching for the knowledge but, students
also
 get a place to study. In the nutshell, we can accumulate the fact that libraries are very essential for students in their life and cannot be replaced by online websites.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessible information
  • online databases
  • e-books
  • educational websites
  • community centers
  • physical books
  • literacy programs
  • peer-reviewed resources
  • misleading information
  • digital divide
  • high-speed internet
  • underprivileged communities
  • custodians of culture
  • archival material
  • conducive environment
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