Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Certain individuals suggest that the major environmental issue of our generation is the extinction of some species of plants and animals.While other states that there are much more relevant environmental issues. Both sides have their own merits and in
this
,
Add an article
an
the
show examples
essay I will discuss both views and the issues they bring to our society. On
one
hand, as humans are looking for more and more places to build their settlements they have started to destroy forests and wetlands where many animals and plants inhabit. Due to ,
this
their life is at risk because they have no other places to go.
This
can indirectly or directly interfere with the environmental food chain or ecological chain built around them. As we have studied in our science class, disturbing any
one
of these processes can lead to the collapse of the entire chain.
For instance
, in
one
of the theories published by Newton if the bee population becomes endangered it can lead to the collapse of the civilization of the human race and all the living things.
On the other hand
, pollutions like air, noise ,etc. and
also
rise in core temperature on the earth is
also
an ongoing issue.,
Still
Add a comma
,Still
show examples
most of our electricity comes from coal and fossil fuel which is a major reason for air pollution
this
leads to 10 million people dying every year.
Also
due to the upwards in earth temperature polar ice caps are melting resulting in rising in sea level.
Moreover
,
this
rise leads to many areas submerging into oceans.
For example
, a report published by the UN stated that cities like New York and Mumbai will be completely underwater by 2050 if
this
upwards trends
continuously
Replace the word
continues
show examples
. To conclude, both the issues are interlinked with each other and we should consider solving them parallelly
instead
of focusing on just
one
part of it.
Submitted by surajgadhvi92 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
What to do next:
Look at other essays: