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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The idea of
world
government
 is a theory
which
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 has been known since the dawn of history. Some people support that a single
government
 could manage all nations. From my perspective, the benefits of a single
government
 far outweigh its disadvantages. A single
government
 could be more efficient and effective in solving global problems
which
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 all nations are suffering in
such
 as climate change and
pandemic
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. The
government
 will focus  highly on policy-making than conflict of interest and will be highly efficient
on
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 pushing and executing policies.
For example
, since
covid-19
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the covid-19
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 outbreak is continuing to grow, some national governments did not face
this
 pandemic problem because of political factors from the beginning and led the whole
world
 to a huge crisis. After
covid-19
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 vaccine broke out, some countries could not increase vaccination coverage because of political factors and
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 resources.
On the contrary
, a single
government
 might fix these kinds of problems that people struggle with now. A
world
government
 will sacrifice the benefits of some hard-to-reach populations and communities.  To be more specific, they can control and decide which place will handle nuclear waste and residents could not fight for
this
.
As a result
, minorities should be sacrificed under
this
government
.
However
, in the same situation, small national governments still can fight for their rights even if it is a majority decision. Overall, a
world
government
 might have many benefits in crisis solving.
However
, how to make
this
world
 fair is the main topic that humans need to concern themselves with.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • centralized policies
  • international cooperation
  • global economy
  • trade barriers
  • military spending
  • authoritarian control
  • cultural diversity
  • national identities
  • local issues
  • homogenized
  • decision-making
  • democratic representation
  • world peacekeeping force
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