More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree (or) disagree?
The compound Now a days appears to be incorrect. Consider changing it to the closed compound nowadays.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
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The noun phrase major problem seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the singular demonstrative that is modifying the plural noun items. Consider using a plural demonstrative or a singular noun instead.
The indefinite article, an, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun obesity in your sentence. Consider removing it.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction that. Consider removing the comma.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.
It appears that the phrase number does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
It seems that pupil may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
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It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The article an may be incorrect. Consider changing it to agree with the beginning sound of the following word report.
It seems that problem may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.
It seems that determiner use may be incorrect here.
The preposition about seems unecessary after the verb discuss. Consider removing the preposition.
The verb causes does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The word life style seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The word life style seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.
The word real doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The noun phrase human body seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It appears that the verb became should be in the past participle form. Consider changing it.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase usually. Consider adding a comma.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase On the other hand. Consider adding a comma.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.