Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing( for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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technological advancements that tracked

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human’s behaviour.

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recent years have witnessed these technologies monitoring it. Both drawbacks along with benefits linked to

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topic will be outlined in the following paragraphs. On the

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hand, there are several beneficial sides

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development. The most important

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intelligent advertisement. It is undeniable that most companies would like to know the information of the buyers to analyze the decision of purchasing their products, resulting in the encouragement of having a big data of their customers, which, in turn, tend to specific the customer’s target when shooting the ads, regardless of the proper method. Another foreseeable plus is the development of artificial intelligence.

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data is often

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of the main factors behind the production of AI nowadays, which, in fact, might well result in the improvement of technological advancements. Without a doubt, the progression of producing AI will eventually benefit

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, a host of detrimental sides that people experienced

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technology.

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significant counterargument is the deficiency of privacy. There is

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consensus that hardly any mobile owners have not to lose their

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to the public by being tracked

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mobile devices. An outstanding example of

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seems to be that applications from

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technological devices tend to record almost

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of the users.

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intrusive advertisements from the apps.

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is the threaten of the hackers.

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is because the

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data of users will be kept on the cloud platform, which is easy to be hacked. To illustrate,

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recent years have witnessed a number of online criminals who not only hack

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crucial information, including credit card number, and

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and

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, from the users but

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use it to steal

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money. To sum up, even though people being monitored by

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technological advances has many beneficial perspectives, the

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perspectives unavoidably outweigh them. Were people to limit be tracked by the technology, it is more likely that they will have

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