Write about the following topic: In the past, everyone wore clothes according to their culture, but now people wear similar clothes all around the world. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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21st-century humans follow the ongoing trend which is been followed all around the
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in a similar way ,let it be the standard of living or regalia that everyone wear is the same.Whereas
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in the past few decades
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was not the scenario,people used to
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the garments according to their
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,every coin has two sides so there are always positive as well as negative impacts of a certain development in the province.As on the whole wearing of same
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took the development of nature to the
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level which shows unity in diversity. In
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context,wearing clothes has always been a judgement in society,let it be anywhere in the
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.During past years people used to wear garb according to their
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because diversity came into existence in the
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few decades.Whereas,now young generation follow the trend which is going on in the
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which creates an amount of various
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in the
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.We have the right to whatever we want to wear.
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creates a huge positive impact on the
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,and the globe looks like one.Noone feels neglected as they can wear anything they want to.
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, a few years ago in my country saree was the only
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which women used to wear but after time passed and changing of fashion come into effect,the other
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Indians attires kurta,pyjama and other jeans t-shirt came into existence,which was influenced from the western fashion.
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,some amount of cultural clothing should be followed in the country because it shows the heritage of that country.Mostly,the clothing part comes from the western part which is followed all over the
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,and one should wear the clothes which are suitable to one's body.
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,in my locality girls are carried away with western
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and they forget that they
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have some kind of
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,which we should always keep in our mind. To conclude,the wearing of clothes and style shows the personality of the people who are wearing the
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,wearing similar attires shows diversity and unity in different cultures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural attire
  • Globalization
  • Homogenization
  • Fashion trends
  • Traditional garments
  • Cultural identity
  • Westernization
  • Multinational brands
  • Cultural diversity
  • Mass production
  • Local textiles
  • Fashion industry
  • Cultural exchange
  • Preservation
  • Assimilation
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