At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages?

These days, the population of several nations demonstrates a large proportion of young persons, in comparison to elderly

people

.

Although

young adults can be more beneficial in terms of hard work and study,

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society needs elder

people

's experiences and knowledge .In my opinion, both young and old

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for an efficient community. On the one hand, a person's youth more likely starts when

people

at the end of their teenage years with lots of power and energy fly the nest and become independent,

obviously

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a basic upside here is when they try to make efforts to the world around them . Admittedly,

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their

first

steps in finding their career is known as a passionate feeling for them.

Moreover

, the ability to establish a family and give

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birth to a child in order to save their country population is a significant benefit.

On the other hand

, despite the fact that older

people

have less strength, the absence of them in a society is a drawback for the simple reason that, they are full of experiences because they lived longer and they have been in different situations and went through various problems.

Furthermore

, when youngsters face

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an issue they visit elders to ask for help. In conclusion, even though there are major disadvantages related to

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an old nation or a young nation there are uncountable benefits associated with having both age period timelines together.