In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In

this

contemporary world,

as a result

of increasing traffic congestion,public

transport

plays a significant role in human life. In some countries,it is believed that a large amount of budget should allocate to erect a new railway for faster

trains

throughout

cities

.

On the other hand

,it is argued that

this

budget should

devoted

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to

extend

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extending

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public

transport

. In

this

essay,I will support both viewpoints and draw some conclusions. Regarding the

first

group of

people

who have an opinion about improving the railway for travelling among

cities

,it can be useful because

of

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several reasons.

Firstly

,moving around

cities

will get much easier,and some

people

should travel to another region for their job,so

this

is very beneficial for them.

furthermore

,it aids to

economic

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of the country.I take tourists as an example.Tourists can readily travel between

cities

in a short period of time due to the fact that some of them do not have enough time for using buses to move around,

also

buying a plane ticket is too costly.thereby,they definitely use these

trains

,and some countries can earn the amount of money from tourists. Turning to the other side of the argument,

people

think that a group of

individual

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who

live

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in the

city

should get

first

priority.It means that public

transport

should be extended,and citizens can have

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lot easier and faster a

daily-commute

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daily commute

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.

For instance

, in

a

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large

citycities

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city cities

,it is too hard to go to work in rush-hour traffic.The vast majority of

people

will be in a trouble.

besides

,

cities

completely get mass up

as a result

of heavy traffic.

Therefore

, authorities should improve the subway or build a faster separate line for buses and

trains

in the

cities

,especially in the

city

. In conclusion,both constructing faster line for

trains

out of the

city

,and building the public

transport

for individuals are necessary.and these plans should be done,but in my perspective,

people

who want to commute in a

city

for their personal work are far important than the other side.