In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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contemporary world,

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of increasing traffic congestion,public

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plays a significant role in human life. In some countries,it is believed that a large amount of budget should allocate to erect a new railway for faster

trains

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throughout

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.

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,it is argued that

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budget should

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to

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public

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. In

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essay,I will support both viewpoints and draw some conclusions. Regarding the

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group of

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who have an opinion about improving the railway for travelling among

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,it can be useful because

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several reasons.

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,moving around

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will get much easier,and some

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should travel to another region for their job,so

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is very beneficial for them.

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,it aids to

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of the country.I take tourists as an example.Tourists can readily travel between

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in a short period of time due to the fact that some of them do not have enough time for using buses to move around,

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buying a plane ticket is too costly.thereby,they definitely use these

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,and some countries can earn the amount of money from tourists. Turning to the other side of the argument,

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think that a group of

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who

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in the

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should get

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priority.It means that public

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should be extended,and citizens can have

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lot easier and faster a

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daily commute

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.

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, in

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large

citycities

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city cities

,it is too hard to go to work in rush-hour traffic.The vast majority of

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will be in a trouble.

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,

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completely get mass up

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of heavy traffic.

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, authorities should improve the subway or build a faster separate line for buses and

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in the

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,especially in the

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. In conclusion,both constructing faster line for

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out of the

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,and building the public

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for individuals are necessary.and these plans should be done,but in my perspective,

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who want to commute in a

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for their personal work are far important than the other side.