Some people believe that violent films are bad for you and encourage people to be violent. Others argue that violence and films are unrelated because violence existed before films. Which of these opinions do you agree with, and to what extent do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays, there are various theme school bully is a serious problem in recent years, there are a study shows that if
films
had been published. In those, films
some criticize hold that violent films
bring negative effects to the recent society. They think that those films
will encourage people
to go crimes while some people
don’t. This
essay totally stands those violent films
are not the reason for the encouraging rate of people
to be violet
.
First
, those people
that be violent is not because of the films
is due to their characteristic or their family. Those people
like to hard someone or bit someone is because that they have been treated before. For example
,Add an article
the
people
have been bullied by someone, that percentage of bullied people
will raise up than others that didn’t be bullied. To sum up, watching violet
films
is not result that people
becoming violently, whereas the background and the environment is the main reason that let people
be violent.
Secondly
, violent films
are just films
. The purpose of people
who created those films
is to let people
who watch this
movie feel happy or feel interested in it. Nowadays people
have been educated and have their own sandal about good and evils. They all know there are
something that they can do or can’t do. Change the verb form
is
People
who go and watch those films
is because they went relax in their busy daily life. Maybe there are some people
due to those films
becoming violet
, but I believe that there is only a small amount. Most people
are just enjoying these films
and like to watch them.
In conclusion, I totally believe that violent films
are not the reason for the encouraging rate of people
to be violet
. People
have been educated while the background and the environment are the main that cause people
to become violent.Submitted by celinelee0903 on
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