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Some people fail in school but End up being successful in life why do you think that is the case? What is most important thing to succeed in life?

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Some
people
 don't do well during their studies;
however
, lead a happy and satisfying
life
. I believe
success
 can not be measured with grades,
thus
 hard
work
 plays an integral part to achieve
success
 in
life
.
To begin
 with , every individual student has
different
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 calibre.
Also
, they have their own tendency to absorb knowledge in different stages of
life
.
Therefore
, some
people
 who don't perform well in school become successful
people
 in practical
life
. The reason behind
this
 is , they are not fond of reading or scared of exams; whereas in professional
life
 they have the talent to handle situations in a more professional way.
Furthermore
, it has been seen that students who get lesser grades in schools mostly end up being qualified professionals because they always live with regrets to achieve something better which makes them more competitive and their hard
work
 pays off. In my belief
success
 mainly depend on two main things.
Firstly
, it is the hard
work
 a
person
 does in their
life
 that certainly makes them successful.
For example
, if a
person
 needs to pass an exam and he works day and night so surely he will get succeeded.
Secondly
, luck is a major factor to become a successful
person
. Some
people
 are God gifted and just with little
effort
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 they can achieve their goals; whereas some
people
 spend their whole
life
 but are never been able to reach their goals. To conclude, I strongly believe that hard
work
 and good luck can change the entire
life
 of a
person
 and help them
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. On the other side, it is not necessary that an average student will never do better in their practical
life
.
however
 average students are more hardworking and achieve their goals faster, so never measure
success
 with children academic performance
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