Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . describe the photograph you sent to the competition . tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown . invite him/her to the exhibition

Dear Amit, I'm very excited to share
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good news with you that I won an award for a photography competition. I clicked the picture of the famous Sealink bridge along with
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sky and ocean view landscapes in the background. Even though the bridge covers almost one-
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portion of the photograph and was
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intended to serve as the main focus element, the orange sun with dawn effect really grabs the attention along with
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view. I was immediately mesmerised by
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photo and decided to give it a shot at the
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fair. The
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fair is a national exhibition that displays many
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forms including painting,
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sculpture
, drama, dance etcetera. The exhibition is a
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fun activity and people can participate in many events; speaking of which, my picture will be displayed
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a large screen at the "Click and Capture" section
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to the Oil painting zone. I will be awarded the cash prize money on the
last
day of the event after evening tea and snacks. I would be delighted to see you there especially at the awards ceremony as you are the one who motivated me to become a professional photographer.
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, if you wish, I can register your invite for a
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pass as well because I have a feeling that you would enjoy all forms of art that will be shown here at the exhibition. Looking forward to meeting you soon! Warmest regards, John
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