Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
Nowadays,everyone's life is influenced by social media
as a result
misdeed rate is enhanced in all countries.Linking Words
Although
some individuals think that there is a lot to stopping breaches,others argue it seems difficult to prohibit criminal activities.Linking Words
This
essay will explore both these notions and I will give my opinion in conclusion.
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To begin
with,There are myriad measures for reducing unlawful activities.Linking Words
Firstly
,most criminal activists are mostly unemployed members of society ,who commit crimes to fulfil their families' basic needs.Linking Words
For example
, a survey,conducted at the University of California,illustrated that in developing countries about sixty per cent of misconducts are Linking Words
due to
a lack of jobs and poverty.Linking Words
Secondly
,the lack of punishment in underdeveloped nations increases crime.Linking Words
Thus
,providing job opportunities and taking measures at the government level to reduce poverty Linking Words
as well as
penalize culprits and reduce the crime rate.
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On the other hand
,opponents believe that in many countries lack of rehabilitation and rejection of acceptance by relatives and other members of the community indulge them in misdeeds.Linking Words
For instance
,if someone is involved in any offence and accused of a criminal once, their family does not accept them.Linking Words
Thus
,if the government creates opportunities for Linking Words
such
people they feel alone and go back to the black world of corruption.
All things considered ,in my opinion,it can be concluded that though society does not accept criminals and they go back to offending society and remain there for the rest of their lives,the government can create work possibilities ,provide proper education and establish a punishment system these crimes can be stopped.Linking Words
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