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Internet is a great source of information and has opened-up opportunities for all people to learn all over the world. Is all information reliable on the internet? What could be done to control the information online.

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In the modern world, the primary source of knowledge is the internet for people of all backgrounds and ages.
However
, all the
data
 available in the online world is not genuine. The users of electronic
data
 should be aware of
this
 fact and need to develop a skill to filter reliable
suggestion
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 from the deluge of
information
 supplied
in
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 the net. In
this
 essay, I will discuss why all the advice that
pop
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 up on the screen are not true and how we can control the incorrect messages from google.
To begin
 with, everyone
ranged
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 from
government
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 to individuals have their own websites which they utilize
everyday
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 to divulge
information
 to
public
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.
Nevertheless
, governments and business organisations supply vital knowledge on their websites, numerous individuals or agencies engage in unethical practices providing misleading suggestions through the same platform.
For example
, a study found that half of the sources of
information
 existing online are fraudulent.
Therefore
, the users need to be conscious of the incorrect
data
. People have their own techniques to control
the
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unwanted suggestions. One of the ways to differentiate scams from factual
data
 is to collect
information
 from the correct web address. We can reach
to
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the original organisation’s website by remembering the name of the website of the organisation we want to visit.
This
 method provides us control over fraudulent
data
. In conclusion,
however
 people of all ages around the world utilize
online
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platform
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 to collect knowledge, they need to be aware of the misleading facts. They ought to open only the original sources of
information
 to avoid any troublesome advice.
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