You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Ali, I am your neighbour and we have recently purchased

this

house. We did not meet each other for an introduction. We are a family of 3 persons in total including my wife and a 2 years old son. We are planning for a party on Monday and you are invited. Actually, my son's birthday is on upcoming Monday and he will turn to 2. On that precious ,

occassion

Correct your spelling

occasion

we have decided to through a party for relatives and friends. The event will be started at 7:00PM and will continue till 11:00PM.

First

there will be a get together following by dinner at 8:30PM. After dinner we have arranged a music concert.

Although

, the participants are limited I am afraid that noise will disturb you. I apologise for the inconvenience you will bear. I want you and your family to be here on that particular day. It will be an honour for me.

This

will help us to understand each other as a neighbour. I will be genuinely pleased if you accept my invitation. Best regards, Rehan

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

housewarming
neighbourhood
settle in
concern
apologize
disturbance
kindly
considerate
join
gathering
introduce
socialize
appreciate
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