You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Ali, I am your neighbour and we have recently purchased

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house. We did not meet each other for an introduction. We are a family of 3 persons in total including my wife and a 2 years old son. We are planning for a party on Monday and you are invited. Actually, my son's birthday is on upcoming Monday and he will turn to 2. On that precious ,

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we have decided to through a party for relatives and friends. The event will be started at 7:00PM and will continue till 11:00PM.

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there will be a get together following by dinner at 8:30PM. After dinner we have arranged a music concert.

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, the participants are limited I am afraid that noise will disturb you. I apologise for the inconvenience you will bear. I want you and your family to be here on that particular day. It will be an honour for me.

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will help us to understand each other as a neighbour. I will be genuinely pleased if you accept my invitation. Best regards, Rehan

akhtar.rehanTue Dec 28 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

housewarming
neighbourhood
settle in
concern
apologize
disturbance
kindly
considerate
join
gathering
introduce
socialize
appreciate
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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Some young people choose to leave their hometown in the countryside to live in big cities, talk about the reasons behind this situation and provide possible solutions

It is controversial whether longer sentences can reduce the crime rate.What is your opinion about this issue?

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should therefore be made more difficult for the individuals to borrow large amounts of money. What are your opinions on this?