In some countries there is not enough recycling of waste materials. What are the reasons for this and some potential solution?

Recycling has become a new trend among countries these years. Policies have been
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implemented
to encourage citizens,
however
, the outcome was not significant. Some say to
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governments
have not
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effort
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funding and educating while some
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that the communities should bear the responsibilities.
Although
the
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government
has been promoting the ideas of three-coloured
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ecycling
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bins for paper,
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and plastic, the enormous wastes produced daily eventually went to the wasteland
instead
of reusing or reproducing as most of the recycling companies do not have fundings and subsidise to deal with
such
workloads and procedures.
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example
,
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a piece of paper may need triple effort than simply
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it away. What's more, communities are not motivated to
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busines
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business
such
as which kind of
waste
could be recycled.
For
example
, A plastic bottle is actually contained
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several
types of plastic and citizen has to
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before putting
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the bins. Most of the
people
would not use
such
time to throw away one rubbish. To cope with
this
problem, the governments could
firstly
enlarge the support and subsidize on recycling industry to enhance the
effiency
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efficiency
and effectiveness of
waste
management,
for
example
, purchasing machines to reproduce
waste
, recruiting more
people
to join.
Also
,
governements
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governments
could place
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incentives
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to encourage
people
such
as gift redemption when they recycled
certain
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amount of wastes and money-reward. To cope with
this
problem, the governments could
firstly
enlarge the support and subsidize on recycling industry to enhance the
effiency
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efficiency
and effectiveness of
waste
management,
for
example
, purchasing machines to reproduce
waste
, recruiting more
people
to join.
Also
,
governements
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governments
could place
incentive
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incentives
show examples
to encourage
people
such
as gift redemption when they recycled
certain
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a certain
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amount of wastes and money-reward.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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