You recently recived a letter from a friends asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Writing a letter to this friend. Hn your letter . say why he/sshe would not enjoy going to college . explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her . suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Hello John,
I hope you are doing great. I am writing to you to express my concern about your problems. I spoke with your mother
last
week and I think I can help you make the correct decision.
In my opinion, you should try to get a job before college. I think college is not as great as you think, especially when you are going there because your classmates do it. Your mother said you are not sure what subject is most interesting for you, so if you pick wrong you will not enjoy classes. You should get a job instead
. I believe work will clear your mind and give you a totally new perspective. You will be able to learn new things and who knows, maybe you will discover a new passion.
In my opinion, you should start looking for a position in a big technology company. They have a lot of entry-level positions and I am sure you will think, that maybe computer science become your passion. Fingers crossed and I really looking forward to hearing you.
Best wishesSubmitted by dariusz.slusar on
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single idea per paragraph
Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea. For example, you can separate your explanation of why college might not be enjoyable and why getting a job is a good idea into two distinct paragraphs.
complete response
Work on providing more detailed reasons to strengthen your argument. For example, you could provide specific benefits of gaining work experience and some potential negatives of choosing the wrong major in college.
suitable writing tone
Consider proofreading your writing to fix minor grammatical issues and typos, such as 'I am really looking forward to hearing you' should be 'I am really looking forward to hearing from you.'
suitable writing tone
You have a friendly and supportive tone throughout the letter, which suits the purpose of giving advice to a friend very well.
greeting and closing
The letter includes a closing remark 'Best wishes,' which effectively concludes the communication in a friendly manner.