Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the 21st century, human life became more complex and materialistic whereby, children and their views on life are changed a lot.

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, some

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that every minor

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have their own rights on making

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but other

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suggested that it is the duty of parents to curtail their

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. In

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essay, I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of

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problem.

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is a source of success whereby, it mitigates our own perception of the problems.

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,

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stimulate self-confidence, personal development and enhance continuous learning. To put it another way, unsuccessful events and

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create significant changes in our intellectual growth.

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father of classical condition define that any successful conditions in our behaviour are achieved through continuous practice and learning from

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.

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, problems are inevitable for professional strength because it motivates humanistic and realistic views in our activities.

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,

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results

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lots of disturbance in our day-to-day progress.

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time-consuming process because we need to recreate the events for achieving success.

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, it will badly affect mental stability whereas,

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go through depression, stress and loneliness .To support

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, according to the American psychological Associationsociation 2019 report on 'young professional mental stability suggested that 75% of it

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are mentally stressed because of their

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of weekly task achievement. Another key things to remember,

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face more challenges and criticism while they made

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in their personal and professional life. In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two sides'

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any problems in our mind gives positive and negative outcomes.Ostensively, parents and

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generation should teach young children that

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is the pathway

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success.