Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the 21st century, human life became more complex and materialistic whereby, children and their views on life are changed a lot.

Hence

, some

people

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that every minor

people

have their own rights on making

failure

but other

people

suggested that it is the duty of parents to curtail their

mistakes

. In

this

essay, I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of

this

problem.

Failure

is a source of success whereby, it mitigates our own perception of the problems.

On the other hand

,

mistakes

stimulate self-confidence, personal development and enhance continuous learning. To put it another way, unsuccessful events and

practice

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create significant changes in our intellectual growth.

For example

, according to Evan Pavlov,

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father of classical condition define that any successful conditions in our behaviour are achieved through continuous practice and learning from

mistakes

.

Furthermore

, problems are inevitable for professional strength because it motivates humanistic and realistic views in our activities.

However

,

failure

results

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lots of disturbance in our day-to-day progress.

Firstly

,it is

more

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time-consuming process because we need to recreate the events for achieving success.

Secondly

, it will badly affect mental stability whereas,

people

go through depression, stress and loneliness .To support

this

, according to the American psychological Associationsociation 2019 report on 'young professional mental stability suggested that 75% of it

professional

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are mentally stressed because of their

failure

of weekly task achievement. Another key things to remember,

people

face more challenges and criticism while they made

mistakes

in their personal and professional life. In conclusion, there is a saying 'a coin has two sides'

similarly

any problems in our mind gives positive and negative outcomes.Ostensively, parents and

older

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generation should teach young children that

failure

is the pathway

of

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success.