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There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, - Describe the construction - Explain why the construction is a problem for you - Say what you would like them to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam,
This
 letter is being written to express my concern over construction
work
that is
 taking place beside my residence and
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the
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voices of drilling machines and builders are extremely
frustating
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frustrating
 and disturbing. I am Manvir
kaur
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Kaur
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 resident of Maya garden society .
A massive
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 construction
work
 is going in our colony . There was a vacant plot beside my house and landowners are constructing
new
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a new
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residencial
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residential
 building over it. All the
work
 have been started
from
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 a very long time. My union public civil service exams are around the corner
of
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this
 month . I am preparing for it for
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the pas
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pas
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past
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 three years . In fact, it is my
last
 attempt and I really want to give my best.
However
, all the noises from machines and trucks are really
infurious
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furious
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injurious
 .
Consequently
 , I am not able to concentrate on my studies
efficently
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efficiently
. I would like to request you to issue a notice to landlords for limiting the time period of
work
 as it is taking place round the clock.
This
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this
 matter. Yours faithfully, Manvir Kaur.
Submitted by Manvir kaur bhatti on

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