There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, - Describe the construction - Explain why the construction is a problem for you - Say what you would like them to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam,

This

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letter is being written to express my concern over construction

work

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that is

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taking place beside my residence and

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the

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voices of drilling machines and builders are extremely

frustating

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frustrating

and disturbing. I am Manvir

kaur

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Kaur

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resident of Maya garden society .

A massive

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construction

work

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is going in our colony . There was a vacant plot beside my house and landowners are constructing

new

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a new

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residencial

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residential

building over it. All the

work

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have been started

from

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for

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a very long time. My union public civil service exams are around the corner

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apply

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this

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month . I am preparing for it for

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the pas

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pas

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past

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three years . In fact, it is my

last

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attempt and I really want to give my best.

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, all the noises from machines and trucks are really

infurious

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furious

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injurious

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, I am not able to concentrate on my studies

efficently

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efficiently

. I would like to request you to issue a notice to landlords for limiting the time period of

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as it is taking place round the clock.

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option would be optimum for both of us. I hope you will take all my points into consideration . Looking for a prompt reply from your side regarding

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matter. Yours faithfully, Manvir Kaur.

Manvir kaur bhattiTue Dec 28 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

208 words

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