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Many people think that to become a successful speciailist it's better to choose a career early in life and never changer it later. To what extent do you agree with tis view. support your opinion with relevant examples.

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It’s the dream of every juvenile to study and become a professional and for ,that he has to choose a path in his early life. It’s been believed by the majority that it is beneficial for every
child
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 to select the profession during his childhood so that he can be a successful expert in his
field
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 and he should never alter his
mind
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 after some time. I am agreeing with the above view. The essay will explain the view and support the same with an illustration.
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, it is the responsibility of the
parents
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 to set the brain of his
child
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 when he is in his childhood whereas there are many
parents
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 who do not groom the
mind
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 of their
child
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 to choose the
field
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 and resultantly that
child
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 did not get success in his life.
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, those
students
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 who choose their
field
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an
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at an
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 early
age
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 become more victorious in their careers.
For instance
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, a survey was conducted in engineering university in which it reveals mostly
students
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 select the engineering department because they choose their filed during juvenility.
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 it is necessary to set the
mind
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 of the minor at an early
age
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 so that he can be successful in his life.
Furthermore
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, a
child
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 whose
field
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 has been chosen at an early
age
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,
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should show his interest
otherwise
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 that will affect his career.
However
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, there are many
students
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 who are compelled by their
parents
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 to choose the specific
field
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 and ,
unfortunately
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 those
students
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 did not get victorious in that
field
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 which affects their personality
also
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.
For example
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, more than 30% of
students
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 are forced by their guardians to select the profession.
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, if a
child
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 is choosing his career
then
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 he should
also
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 show his willingness in that
field
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. To conclude, I am accepting the view that a
child
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 needs to select his
field
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 at an early
age
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 but is subject to his interest and
parents
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 should groom the
mind
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 of the
child
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 during childhood.
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