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You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Neighbour

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Dear Neighbours, I am writing you to state my concerns that we have in our shared parking
area
,
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 which recently started especially after some of you upgraded to big, luxury SUV cars. My first complaint is about, parking outside of the designated lines which causes us to struggle to park in our own
area
 if we park improperly.The second issue is about security and lightning in our parking
area
. I feel very unsafe, especially during late nights when it is very dark.
Above all
,I have two suggestions to overcome these problems that we face nowadays. We can have a vote to choose a fixed parking place for everyone, depending on your comfortability to park that spot we can discuss in detail. The other problem is slightly easy to solve, we can just install some night lamps to brighten up the
area
 and install some security cameras.
Therefore
, I am inviting you all to discuss and decide on possible solutions next Saturday at 11.00 AM in our parking lot. I believe we can overcome those issues quickly in a peaceful environment. Waiting for all your
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RVSPs
 by tomorrow.
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 Sincerely, Unit 5
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear central idea and avoid discussing multiple issues at once for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Use cohesive devices effectively throughout the letter to link ideas and paragraphs together seamlessly.
task achievement
Try to provide specific examples and details to elaborate on the issues you've mentioned, which helps in fully accomplishing the task.
task achievement
Maintain a polite and formal tone consistently throughout the letter to address your neighbors respectfully.
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