You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

Dear sir, I am writing to you
that
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because
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, Recently, I got a
job
in Melbourne, so that my family members and I are planning to move to
USA
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the USA
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.
Hece
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Hence
Here
Heck
, I hope you will be guided me to purchase a new
house
there. I am Bala. I have two children and my wife all are coming with me due to my
job
.
Firstly
, I am looking for a double bedroom along with a fully furnished
house
.
Additionally
, one playroom for my kids and
also
a balcony. Even more, I expect car parking maybe I will buy a car after three months.
Furthermore
, it will be good for one additional room for my guests.
Although
, I got a
job
nearby
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Illinois. so that, it would be great, if you find out a
house
nearby my working place.I don’t want a
house
far from my
job
location because it has increased my travel time.
Hence
, It will be helpful if you will find out the apartment as per my wish. I am waiting for your kind response. Yours faithfully, Bala
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