In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines will replace many of the tasks we do at home and work now. Discuss the benefits this will bring and also the problem it will cause.

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There is no doubt that robots and other kinds of powerful
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will accompany humans even more in the future.
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,
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will enjoy more time off . To my mind,
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evolution has its pros and cons which I analyze in
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essay. Using
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will bring countless merits for
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. One of the main benefits is
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can save time. Especially, it will be showing shown more and more benefits for women , as if mostly
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at
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have been completed by them.they can more hours with their family . Not only for females but
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beneficial for males who live apart from family.
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, some
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live alone as well as do
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or study and they do not have enough
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at
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to complete all
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so
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will help them to finish their task.
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, there are some drawbacks for
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to use
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for
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at
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.
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, it has been proven by science,
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can only survive by working if they are working
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their body parts are
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working. If folks have fully depended on technology for finishing all works,
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they become lethargic and it becomes
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extremely negative for our health .
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, some
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do jobs at
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as a helper and make money because of
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they can complete their daily needs. If all things are done by
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then
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,
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do not have need helpers and needy
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become jobless. In conclusion , thanks to modern machinery
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will have taken big time for themselves while these things stand up some problems to those for
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who depend on that's
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