Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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The diagram shows how coal is used to generate
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. The flow chart illustrates the way in which coals are used for
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generating. Overall, there are 6 distinct stages in the whole
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electricity producing
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process, beginning with the extracting coals from mountains and ending with the transporting
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to the power line for consuming that.
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, through a particular roller device is entered to a machine which is crashed them by making use of two pulverises which is situated in the middle of
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, these crashed coals are heated in a furnace. In the following stage, the long pipe transfers
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between the cooler and turbine
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is gone to the generator and the following
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by the generator is transported to the specific transformer.
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is converted to power lines and prepared for consumers
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • natural habitats
  • ecological balance
  • biodiversity
  • confinement
  • natural stimuli
  • psychological problems
  • genetic homogeneity
  • environmental changes
  • adapt and evolve
  • survival of the fittest
  • social structures
  • communication patterns
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