Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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commented that the best way to enhance folk medical

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is done by soaring game infra-structures.

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, others believe that

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's health. Personally, I advocate the

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owing since, industrialized food and tightened work schedule is behind

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could contribute

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to boost their lifestyle.

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essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments. On the one hand, industrialized meals are responsible for

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crowd medical issues.

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, these days people have factory based meals

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as hot dogs, and

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healthy

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, it leads to

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plethora of clinical diseases

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as obesity and heart attack. Let us take sugar as an example, the world health organization recommends only one

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spoon daily, that said, 90% of Women and

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Men eat three times more than the quantity endorsed.

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high cholesterol leading to illnesses. On other hand, sports infra-structures shrink people's work stress. Because of high demanded jobs,

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need public

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to warm and exercise to relax. 60% of full-time employees were found out of their work burden after spending a day per week in stadiums, according to the University Zambeze overhaul carried out

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, workers were more

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in their employments and it soared profits.

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, it is seen as the overriding reason for reduced hospitalization for supporters of the idea. In conclusion, notwithstanding some benefits coming from sports

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, it does not play a relevant role on a folk lifestyle because lately what

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eat does.

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, I still believe that the quality of

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their medical condition. I recommend ruling

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final resources that should be used to construct these

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to allocate them on other projects.